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The scars on my wrist on prominent
My death and suicide is imminent
I wish you could feel the effects of your words on my well being
The blood rushing from my wounds is freeing, and uplifting
I may look fine on the outside but on the inside I am dying
I can't seem to shake this constant crying
In a dark room all alone no one to look to
Except myself in the mirror someone I wish I knew
I just want to die
I don't even know why I even try
This life is a joke it feasts on the innocent, and broken
So many words of the dead left unspoken
Lifes cut short by heavy scrutiny, and hatred
Nothing in this world is sacred
I walk a path of pure sadness, and regret
Wondering if it would be a good idea to just end it all yet
Take away the pain I feel inside
Save everyone the trouble of slowly killing me
The pain is all I have left
Happiness is just a memory
My mind went to a really dark place with this one. Thank you for reading and please if you enjoyed it please watch me I will watch you back.
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writeyourownstory Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Really good! I like how dark it is. And lolz at my signature:)
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Billm2n Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student Writer
Your sig is really awesome, and thank you :glomp: <3
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writeyourownstory Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student General Artist
:) your welcome!! actually my sig's from an awesome song called Dead! by my chemical romance
more hugs :huggle:
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Billm2n Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student Writer
I know My Chemical Romance is one of my favorite bands :] Famous Last Words is my favorite song by them. :D or the song cancer.
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writeyourownstory Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Student General Artist
The Black Parade was the best album. My favorite song's blood:)
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Billm2n Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Student Writer
Very good song x3
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writeyourownstory Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Student General Artist
:)
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thesecretoutlet Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
This is not half bad, compared to the other suicidal poems I've seen. Very expressive! I feel the pointlessness too sometimes, because we're all just trapped by our own needs and everyone else's expectations... But I feel obligated to tell you that there is stuff to live for! like me. If anything. I'm pretty awesome. ;) but seriously, there is. It's really a beautiful world, and you can see it if you avoid watching the news and look at the beauty people create through art and poetry like this!
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Billm2n Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you very much that means a lot coming from such a beautiful person such as yourself. I personally am not on the brink of suicide but have thought about it and have decided there is a lot to live for in this world. It does get better, and it helps to have nice people to talk to like you :] if you would like to talk sometime I would gladly add you to my skype.
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thesecretoutlet Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012
hm I have a very small house and it would be hard to skype without my family asking questions (this is a secret account... hee hee) but I would gladly chat on facebook! :) What's your name (I can't give mine haha)
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Billm2n Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Student Writer
It is facebook.com/Warforthatguy :)
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thesecretoutlet Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
okay awesome! my initials are L C so accept me
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Billm2n Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Student Writer
Done :3
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TheMoralMachine Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012   Writer
Like I'm honestly concerned...
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:iconbillm2n:
Billm2n Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student Writer
I am perfectly fine thanks for asking ^^
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TheMoralMachine Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012   Writer
Alright, and I also understand what it's like to be in a bad place...
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:iconbillm2n:
Billm2n Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student Writer
Yeah it is horrible but it does get better.
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:iconthemoralmachine:
TheMoralMachine Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012   Writer
Yeah, I mean eventually you find your true friends who'll help you, but it all takes a while.
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Billm2n Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student Writer
Hey well if it means anything I am here for you if you ever need someone to talk to. :]
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:iconthemoralmachine:
TheMoralMachine Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012   Writer
Yeah, you too. :w00t:
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:iconbillm2n:
Billm2n Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student Writer
:glomp:
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:iconthemoralmachine:
TheMoralMachine Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012   Writer
Are you ok?
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Crazygamegirl Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
I enjoy it 3
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Billm2n Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student Writer
Good to hear <3
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Crazygamegirl Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
^^
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jesd2 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
:O That is...really deep and morbid. I like it. :)
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Billm2n Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you very much <333333 It really is nice to see that some people like my work.
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jesd2 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
XD Don't thank me for liking to read your poem. It was really good, honestly.
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Billm2n Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student Writer
Well it really means a lot. :] :iconsuperglompplz:
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jesd2 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
Haha okay then no problem. :)
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