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Bring me back to the start,
Back when "I love you" was all that we could say,
I think about the decisions I've made everyday,
They haunt me and I just can't get away,
What we have is a status, there is no substance,
I've kept myself from better days because of you,
Left my heart broken... black and blue,
This will be all over soon,
Covering up the hurt of an open wound,
Being with you is like constantly stabbing myself in the chest,
I can't go on with this much blood on my hands,
If you understood how much I wish I could move on then you might understand,
I'm a broken man hoping for something new in this life,
Something to distract me from the pain and strife,
Maybe someone good enough to one day become wife,
My cheeks are stained with the tears I've cried,
Sometimes I'm confused at why I don't just die,
Oh yeah because I don't quit,
I always keep going not giving a shit,
I may be broken and I may cry,
But I can promise that I will never die.
This is quite old, I found this on my hard drive it's from like February enjoy! :D
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Avix215 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is excellent! Many deep thoughts went into this, i can see. Very thought-provoking. Love it! :D
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anaios Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I particularly enjoyed this part: "What we have is a status, there is no substance", it's very meaningful :heart:
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xila427 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Student General Artist
LOVE <3
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tabbycat21 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
i love it. it sounds liek me
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LiveOneLifeAtATime Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Somehow... Some... How... You managed to take my exact feelings and thoughts and put them here. I love it, and kudos to you.
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italiano444 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really good, do you write poetry much? :)
If you want to, maybe you could have a look at my poetry folder and see what you think
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billm2n Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Student Writer
I write quite a bit ^.^ I have actually upwards of like 50 poems on here :P And yeah I'll go have a look <3
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italiano444 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wow that is a lot. I don't have that many up. Most of mine I don't even write down or store anywhere. Found that the shower is a good place for poetry creation :P
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FanaticalPublishing Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
I like this; if you ever want to get published, look me up: [link]
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